Shanice has it good, but her ancestors have been through so much. She is a very grateful girl whom had grown up in a neighborhood with all Indians and she wouldn't imagine her life without all the things she does with her tribes. She has accomplished many things in life and she went through school and she was on to college. Back then the schools were practically dangerous and sad. Back then people used to get beat for disobeying rules and doing something they weren't supposed to do. Schools back then for Indians were very racist. I say this because they would strip them of everything they knew. Everything they grew up with and that is really sad. Shanice lives a good life and she feels bad for her ancestors because of what they had to go through.
Thursday, April 16, 2015
Native Americans then and now
Shanice has it good, but her ancestors have been through so much. She is a very grateful girl whom had grown up in a neighborhood with all Indians and she wouldn't imagine her life without all the things she does with her tribes. She has accomplished many things in life and she went through school and she was on to college. Back then the schools were practically dangerous and sad. Back then people used to get beat for disobeying rules and doing something they weren't supposed to do. Schools back then for Indians were very racist. I say this because they would strip them of everything they knew. Everything they grew up with and that is really sad. Shanice lives a good life and she feels bad for her ancestors because of what they had to go through.
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Cynthia, you have so great ideas in your first paragraph. But, you also use terms like "bogus" which is not really appropriate for this kid of assessment. You are making this too casual and it can been seen as not taking the topic seriously. Also, what do you mean they were "stripped of their color"? I think you need to be a but more clear here.
ReplyDeleteAs for paragraph 2, you didn't answer the question. Why did she write this essay? You need to explicitly answer this question.